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Old 11-25-2008, 02:46 AM   #1 (permalink)
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All natural guys feel free to criticise!!!!!!!!!!!
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Old 11-25-2008, 08:21 AM   #2 (permalink)
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You don't need to make 4 threads on the same thing.
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Old 11-25-2008, 08:48 AM   #3 (permalink)
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your lat spread looks funny. not much lats, you need to work on those, you legs have great definition. is there something wrong with your back? it doesnt look right with the bulges up by your shoulder blades?
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Old 11-25-2008, 08:56 AM   #4 (permalink)
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he was spreading the lats :O nah joke man^^ looking good but you definetly need to bulk up dude get some mass
 
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Old 11-25-2008, 08:59 AM   #5 (permalink)
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Youre pretty lean.Your back looks thick but you def need to work on getting some size in your lats.You need some size overall actually.
keep it up man.
I would do a bulk.lift big+eat big=get big
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Old 11-25-2008, 10:07 AM   #6 (permalink)
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Bro you are skinny
You def need to do a cycle
 
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Old 11-25-2008, 10:24 AM   #7 (permalink)
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really bro, this is the tenth ****in thread you made on the exact same thing.... chill ur grill
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Old 11-25-2008, 12:35 PM   #8 (permalink)
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Bro you are skinny
You def need to do a cycle
Now why would you tell him to do a cycle?
there is many other ways to put on mass not just that way.But yes he is skinny but obviously he loves it
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Old 11-25-2008, 12:37 PM   #9 (permalink)
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this is like spamming.
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Old 11-25-2008, 02:20 PM   #10 (permalink)
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latslatslatslatslatslats!!!!
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Old 11-25-2008, 03:56 PM   #11 (permalink)
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Bro you are skinny
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Are you stupid? I hope you were joking?
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Old 11-25-2008, 04:12 PM   #12 (permalink)
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mate keep up the good work, try and eat some more food and lift heavier weights to help you get bigger, if thats whats your after
 
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Old 11-25-2008, 04:43 PM   #13 (permalink)
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damn dude your shoulders are great. If I could criticize anything its just to put on more mass.
 
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Old 11-25-2008, 05:47 PM   #14 (permalink)
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Are you stupid? I hope you were joking?
Stupid thats harsh i was being a smart ass the dude posted it 3 times
Natural was not really impressed His EGO seems bigger than he is.
 
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Old 11-25-2008, 06:29 PM   #15 (permalink)
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You have a weird looking back...it kinda looks like a bit of a hunch back...but you need more overall mass.
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Old 11-25-2008, 10:36 PM   #16 (permalink)
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he pmd me and his lat spread he is pushing his shoulder blads out. you need to practice posing and put on mass mass mass. you have a great build so far just keep building man.
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damn dude your shoulders are great. If I could criticize anything its just to put on more mass.

finally, somebody else who thinks he has great shoulders

good definition on quads bro.
your leg size in general must go up too.

you're on the right track.
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Old 11-26-2008, 07:15 PM   #18 (permalink)
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your shredded to be sure, good muscle definition, looks like your in the shape for a bb show, good work!!
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good definition great shoulders and quads dude bulk like a mad man you will be huge one day
 
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finally, somebody else who thinks he has great shoulders
I agree with you on the shoulders, but give me an epiphone les paul over an ibanez anyday although I wouldn't mind having an Ibanez RG350DX
 
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Old 11-28-2008, 08:29 PM   #21 (permalink)
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I appreciate EVERYONES much needed criticism!! It helps!! In regards to the pose it looks lke I have a hunchback haha i kno, but I dont have that pose perfected so I was just tryna show a little bit of improvement in mass and the lats....not a professional by any means and I dont profess to be, just tryna get help and guidance from the mature wise bodybuilders who know more than me and have more to say than i need to juice. Sorry not for me.
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